Sirhc7000's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[HW - Day 8 Beat 15]

This is fresh.

The samples are so chill. and ur right it does progress well, it makes the listener want to hear the whole thing. The transitions to each section are well done. I love how a lot of these synths have sort of an echo effect on them. nice touch.

Some criticism: I think the part at 1:26 may just be a TAD too loud. I also think the bass could have also used a bit of a change up. Like the last two bass notes b4 it loops back on itself (they're both the same not), they could pitch up or down a half-step depending on that guitar strum sound (it's really hard to explain lol).

Great beat tho. Love chill stuff. Keep it up!

haywirehaywire responds:

thanks a lot dude, glad you enjoyed it

[Sitting On The Moon]

really liked it.

The intro really grabbed me. Definitely felt the "chill-ness" in the beginning. I like how u kept it simple too b/c that added to the theme of chilling out in this piece.

SOME CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM: I felt like the 808 drum that u used could varied in pitch a little bit more to match the melody. For example at 30 second the melody drops a key and the 808 remains the same pitch (I think its pitch should drop as well). Also, some spacey sounds and some other high pitched noises might do some good (like a vibraphone or something with a varying, melody. Also, I feel like some good bass will also chill out the piece even more (but not too loud b/c you already have the 808 going!)

even tho i have more constructive criticism doesnt mean I dont like your piece just so you know. I really do like it. but those are just my suggestions. Otherwise, I think you've done a good job with this one. I be watching out for more from you.

Kannon1 responds:

Thank you for the the critique! I really appreciate it and I will adjust it. I actually love this beat. It's mellow and spacey and even though it's my beat, I still feel entranced by it. Thank you.

[FF | The Phuket Quartet]

wooo too smooth...

soo sick man. Once again I love ur style. This mess is smooth beyond belief. Those drums have a really jazzy bump to them and love the voice, sax, and organ.

I also have to say that short 2 second intro really grabbed me for some reason. You really know how to drag people in and listen to the beat. uhhh...wut else, wut else...umm I guess the last real thing I can say is is great job with the progression of the beat. It doesn't feel repetitive at all. Great job mane.

freddyfinger responds:

thanks a lot man, really appreciate it

[GSG - Violet Monk Sunglasses]

Wow this is sick...

I can't believe I'm just now discovering ur stuff. I have no real complaints here. Everything in this beat is pretty spot-on. Please keep it up and bring more of this ear candy. I'll be waiting to hear more from u.

[EX!!! - Lucky]

Those drums.....

ILL!!! Im really feelin those drums. Soo old school sounding. Plus that reggae sample (it is a sample right?) gives it kinda a "bounce". The mix of both hip-hop and Reggae is great man. Keep it up!

9/10
5/5

EternalXIII responds:

Thanks!!! Yeah, it is a sample. It was Jackie Mittoo.

Thanks again for the review!

[AJ: Hello Mrs. Kennedy]

Congrats man! :D

U got top five for the week!!

As for reviews, this has a real old skool vibe with those drums. To be honest I feel like it could be a little boring with the same sample repeating every 5 seconds or so (just leaving my honest opinion). It's still smooth with that change up at 1:00 tho. Still, not one of my faves from u but still great job man.

[Big Red - Mr Jones]

HOLY....

WHY HAVENT I HEARD U ON NG B4?!! wow dogg 10/10 all the way!!!!

Extra pro dogg!

BigRed responds:

Thanks Sir! I dig a lot of your tunes, I'm pumped to get this feedback from you!

[HW - Piano III]

Man....

This is just beautiful...I aspire to be as good as this man.

Although I've been playing since I was a kid I can still only read and not play by ear and by my soul. This....THIS definitely has soul in it. Haywire, what can I say man. Ur super talented kid. *clap clap* Bravo. Keep doin your thing man. I already respected you b/c of your tracks but this brings on a whole new level. Wish you weren't leaving NG, but I'll def follow you on MySpace. Keep all of us posted!!

Peace.

haywirehaywire responds:

thanks a lot man im glad to have found someone like you on NG.
once i have my songs covered with a better license ill definetily come back on NG and post all my stuff.
thanks again

[HW-Sense I, A Clear Appea]

*cries*

soo beautiful....mannnn Haywire u killin me with these beats!!!! XD

that drum pattern is wassup and the bass is on point. Adding the voices and the (i guess) windy amibiance, makes this beat soo nutz. good shit man. A def download.

haywirehaywire responds:

thanks a lot sirhc.